Thursday, April 8, 2010

stumbling, mumbling

___I had to write a sonnet for my English class. It's not totally in iambic pentameter (I literally have no rhythm.) Thought it had a cute melody though, so I thought why not show of my quote on quote poetic talents. Haha
Stumbling, mumbling, it can always finds you.
It trips and flips, it sends you head o'er heels.
Bumbling, fumbling, you blush 'til you turn blue.
It clips and nips, the parts of souls, it steals.
Sighing, flying, you pine away the day.
It shakes and quakes, it's shivers down the spine.
Dying, crying, your world is turning gray.
It breaks and takes, you feel your soul is swine.
Laying, preying, it waits 'til eyes are closed.
It finds and winds around and round and round.
Weighing, praying, your heart becomes exposed.
It blinds and binds until your soul feels drowned.
But soon it takes your saddened soul above,
And souls do mix to form the truest love.

{weheartit}

12 comments:

  1. It's beautiful, and sweet picture to accompany it.

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  2. Nice picture, so pretty your post!

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  3. Oh I loved your sonnet, well done! :) Have a happy weekend sweetie.

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  4. I love it... you do write well. It's such a fun yet deep poem. xoxo

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  5. Cute poem. Love the rhyming words. :)

    Lots of love,

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  6. Awww..you're so creative! I love reading poems and that's one of the cutest ever! Very sweet picture too! xoxoxoxxo

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  7. Fantastic sonnet, darling!
    Hope you got an A!

    xoxox,
    CC

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  8. Oh, I absolutely love this. What a beautiful sonnet. I just know that you are going to be the star of the class with this piece!! :)

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  9. this is beautiful honey, what a beautiful piece!
    xoxo
    marian.

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